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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Unwill me now And I will fall Through desert moorland I will walk And submit to all You ever sought Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...such passion, such "giving"...such a great poem. I am in the presence of greatness..I am humbled. Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
That poem was breathtaking! I, too, am humbled! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ditto the above...so short, so well done. jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ditto the above...so short, so well done. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I loved it also. Much feeling in few words. |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Ooooo, Uta. I liked this a lot. It has an almost self-sacrificial undertone. Great work. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
OOOh wow fantastic work! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work from a great person. wonderful poem do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lotharingia,well im glad i decided to visit Dark passions cos i have found you...i always admire people who packs lots in few words and you seem to be one of them...  Chibi saw self-sacrifical...i saw a slaved person,unable to break free |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thanks all!!! Kaile, Chibi, you're both right: there is self sacrifice, but only because the person concerned has reached an all time low, she sees no other option, she has given up. BTW, Kaile, thanks for the compliment! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ooh Uta... this one is fabulous! Hmm... expressed very well! |
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