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Dark Poetry #2

A Deal Bearer

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:55 PM

Speak of the devil and you have arrived
What is the business this time around?
Not satisfied with the last deal
So you come to offer me your appeal
Wasting your time is what you do
You know I cannot be tempted by you
Go and find someone else to take your offer…

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-07-06 07:53 AM

Makes me think I will not be taken in, tempted by what I know is wrong..I like this alot, good work here

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-07-06 08:10 AM

Well, I wish I could say he same about myself ... Great poem, Xeonox

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-06 10:39 AM

This poem is great! It captures the feelings well. Your way with words is wonderful!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-06 02:27 PM

great poem it really gets you thinking. i enjoyed it alot keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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