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A Disappointment
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A Disappointment |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
A Disappointment Yesterday I was a disappointment Yesterday I saw love Today I see disappointment What have I done? I look into your eyes I see hate I have disappointed you I don't know why Why am I so stupid? A disappointment I did wrong, but why? I am not what you wanted Useless for a human Why did I do wrong Why am I never right Always a disappointment Never what you wanted Why am I here I should die This is the last time I will be A disappointment ~This poem is not about me, just hoping some can relate to it and realize that they don't need to kill themselves. Just be yourself and don't take this poem to your heart.~ "True friends stab you in the front" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice poem, and very sad. Glad that you are not feeling like that Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Chel...I agree with CatalinaMoon...nice poem, but glad it's not about you. Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A cry for understanding. Well put. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i am also gald to know thats its not about you. it is sad yet meaningful really enjoyed it keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Aw, so sad....a cry of desperation and regret.... |
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