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Acidic Tears
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Acidic Tears |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Acidic Tears Acidic tears released seeping sadness burning wasted skin raw and open sores oozing pain from within the depths of my flesh little pieces of my battered and broken soul falling in free form from every opening burning holes in my tattered clothing battle wounds and scabby scars worn like medals or signs or perhaps warnings to the world that time could be better spent than on an ill-lived soul, seeping acidic tears. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Heavy stuff with hidden meanings quite clever!! Perhaps indeed it is a warning, the world should harken too  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
SpitFire...it's just a matter of finding the right chemistry. One day someone with alkaline love will come along to neutralize those acidic tears. Enjoyed it....Hardrock |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A dark poem, very well written. Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a very well written poem. and i to hope you find that love your looking for. till we meet again my friend keep your head up and your eyes on the prize. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
that time could be better spent than on an ill-lived soul, seeping acidic tears i love this one.. great work, SpitFire |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Enjoyed this poem Spitfire |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
BRAVO... (eagerly awaiting an encore) |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
This was frightening - why must lovers be like that - no doubt - you have described the raw pain beautifully. Deepak Menon |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you all kindly for reading and for your words....helping to dry these acidic tears. Anyway,...just a huge thanks to all. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hey kid did I tell you I love vinegar, I do. this one of your's I just dont' know kid.?? some heavy stuff here. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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