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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-06-30 12:02 PM




I want to do something vile
to him.
I won't of course.
But a cold fury has
wrapped itself around me
tonight.
Icicles, sharp and cold
invade my space.
Dark thoughs clamor
to be released.
It's a very good thing
I was raised a lady,
or this cold fury
could do some damage.
Tomorrow, I will let it go.
He's not worth the time.
But tonight,
anger is my companion,
and he's staying
for awhile.

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-30 01:00 AM


OH....I've definitely been here! Sometimes that cold fury is the only thing that keeps you going....good poem!  
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-30 02:05 AM


i hope to hear that you have cheered up. but sense you can't hurt him you want me to LOL i hope that made you smile

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-06-30 11:14 AM


Whoa dont I know this feeling too well!! Anger stays for as long as you let it, and sometimes I want it there!!    Keep ur head up and stay strong!!  The anger does fade along with the love.  

Great poem!!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
4 posted 2000-06-30 03:58 PM


Hmmmm, Ive heard we can think anything we want as long as we don't act on it. Anger can be a great motivator too!!! I can help you plot....Just kidding loved the poem and very appropriate for "the" situation, Good job My Friend!!!!!
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