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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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My life is composed of later. Later I will be back home. Later I will be in his arms. Later I will hear his voice. Later I will have security. Later I will be happy. I've learned to deal with this, it's just the way it is. Now is not so good- later is all I have. Fine. Later my life will be as it should be. Later I will have my true soul mate. Later-maybe next year? My only fear is that later might be too late... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my gosh,...this poem is so true for me in so many ways. I am always saying that I am going to have done things and gotten things in my life ,..you know....LATER. hehe. I have a whole lifetime of things already done in my mind,...but for later. aaagghh. Great work. Hang in there. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Cat...loved this. And you are right....later MAY be too late. Procrastination will be the ruin of me. But for now I'll just put on my later-hosen and do a polka.~Grins~ Hardrock |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Right you are. Well done. It takes far less energy to love than to hate! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Better later than never?  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ahhhhh...Pause for reflection....Hope doth reign supreme, later sounds great to me, for sooner is too quick, and I am above all else a procrastinator supreme....I love it moon. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting poetic form. I like your monologue-type style. What you say is right. Carpe Diem! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
later is never to late as long as you can finish whats on your plate in the time you have with Him/her,ect. whatever it might be there is no such things as being to late. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Too late! is also my fear!! Thanks! Click |
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