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The Way
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The Way |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
THE WAY: From an ancient creed Comes a powerful seed Be the one who knows More passion inside The heart's reply Endless, aching flow How can I be The real me Sunken, deep below A glorious strength A sunshine A new day Returns, the way to show. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
What was the creed??/lol nice poem |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Unreal, short and sweet, I hate it when you have no control over how the world see's you, you have it in your poem, control I mean, returning. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sylvia...very impressive, and I'm not easily impressed. Excellent construction, wording....I like this type of poetry. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i felt this one before. i've kind of changed my views on life though because i am who i am and people have to take me for me. well anyway great work here and i hope to see more of you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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