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AnGeLiX17
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since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-27 03:40 AM


Turning a page,
hidden rage,
afraid of the phase,
life is like a maze,
two babies as confused as me,
what will we all grow up to be?
Have I made permanent scars on their lives?
Fear of the future cuts like knives,
is "happy" a real emotion?
because for me it's only a notion


© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-27 03:44 AM


may i be the first to reply to this wonderful work of art. i see a great gift that you have and i hope you use it well. i loved this piece so very much and i can't wait to read more of you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-06-27 09:31 PM


All you can do is love to the best of your ability, do harm to no one and be true to yourself.  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-27 11:34 PM


Wise words from Poet Devine and I'll add to her description and always have hope in a brighter tomorrow.
Great piece, glad you reposted it!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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