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Slow Burn |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Oh, there is some trouble brewing. I can feel it heating up. Only so much frustration can be contained. One of these days (not long now) it's going to boil over. I will have you- regardless of the consequences. Oh yes, trouble is brewing. A hot cup of coffee, just a bit too full. When it spills, it's going to burn. And you know, it will be well worth it. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Hey catalina, I really like this it will be worth it to me kind of seems provacative great poem Blue |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is really good. i like how you use the cofe and boiling over as key words of your feelings this is truely great. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes some pain is truly worth it. We must judge as to how much is although. love this idea of a poem kid. really great. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow!!!!!! i really love this!!!! i also have a poem entitled a slow burn, but it is nothing like this!!! i like this cuz i can't tell if you are saying the burn is good or bad. i sense some infatuation maybe?? who knows?? it is 5 in the morning!!! i just love your work, moonbeamgirl!!! kynder |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Catalina....I was struck by the line "I will have you"....It scared me and yet it intrigues me. Such determination invoked visions of Fatal Attraction.....Great work, gave me chills.....Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for all the comments. And Hardrock, don't worry I am not a bit psycho, just a lot frustrated.  |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ooh. I like this one! Yep - can feel the frustration. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh yes The slow burn....and we do get burnt but go for it anyways!!!! I can relate very well, Excellent verse!!! |
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