Dark Poetry #2 |
There is no point |
baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
What am I doing with my life Everytime . . . EVERY TIME My blood freezes, my tongue hides No encouragement has ever helped No matter the situtation Nor the chances For as the chances near So do my fears I watch as they arrive Hide as they stay Struggle when they go In the end all i can do is to wonder What am I doing with my life There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey bae ... so much emotion here my friend ... your angst and frustration drip from it... may I say..the point is ...you are a poet by the gift of your poetry and words -- you always have a voice and reason... as long as you write...you heal take care kind poet jm |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Same here my friend, same here... Really great expression, take care! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So many times I have wondered the same. Thank you for a good morning read. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thanks jm, but sometimes having what it takes to be a poet is beyond what I want to expirence. Maybe someday I'll be able to change the tone of the things I write ... someday. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
you have toned the pen. Great read baerlon, SO many times we have all felt the same way, you just brought these words to life. Thank you |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Hey, it's just great your poem! but I don't think that a lot of people really know what to do with their lives, so you're not the only one... love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
The part that went, "So do my fears. I watch as they arrive hide as they stay struggle when they go" Allow me to just say, "WOW". Awesome read, baerlon!! I LOVED IT!!! I am in the same boat, no clue as to what I'm doing here, but hopefully, we'll all get through it... together. ((HUGS)) Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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