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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
Do you ever see it coming, See it rolling gently forth? Does it ever reach you, Exposing all it’s worth. Do you beckon it, Encourage it, Demand that it presents? If so, Can you stand naked before it And embrace all that it consents? Do you follow, When you demand that it lead? Do you nurture it’s products And set them to seed? And, As the seeds flourish Do you? Nurture them To grow wild… Do you? Smother them Keeping the beauty inside… Do you? Expose them Let them flounder ‘til they die. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
An interesting poem Nancee, Oh by the way I missed this on your first post. Welcome to passions. and thank you for all your replies. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
A myriad of possibilities with all those questions and then the statement at the end twists it around. Intriguing. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i also welcome you its great to see new faces here. this is another great piece of your work and i can't wait to read more. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
yes i do. or wait, do i? this is excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaaaa hoooooo !!! we got another good one up in here!!!! us lost souls gotta stick together!! strength in numbers ya know!! kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I liked it!! I really liked it! Thank you! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I found so many different meanings in this poem. It's one of those "universalist" type writings that adjusts itself to each person, based on his/her experiences. Viewed from different perspectives, like a diamond, it reflects its many facets. Great work....great poem. I feel positively good! Thanks...... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Intriging! I like the flow on this..so are you going to let us know? |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
This was a question posed to my lover; an answer was not forthcoming. May my CO (Joel) please expand. gothicmoth-love your title, so strange to hear mine in others eyes. JJ- thanks for the inspiration, I've e-maled this site, and everyones replies, to my close friends. kynder-I know. love your signature... You guys give me goosebumps, thank you for replying. Thank You Click. Hardrock-I would like to spend a second of eternity in your mind, amazing!!!!!, thank YOU. Poet de Vine-Thankyou for the e-mail, now you know. |
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