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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-08-02 03:41 AM


This is just another poem,
telling of how I was hurt by a guy,
and how I couldn't see through his mask,
because he was so sly.

This is just another cry,
wept out into the night,
of how I hide my face in shame,
afraid to see the light.

This is just another tale,
of love leaving me behind,
with neverending queations,
runing through my mind.

Mine is just another heart,
being broken and torn to shreads,
after believing in a guy,
and whatever he said.

This is just another ending,
even though it's not happily-ever-after,
but soon after the painful tears,
I know will come sweet laughter.


EVEN ANGELS FALL.

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-08-02 07:34 AM


This is just another really good poem!! The heartbreak does ease with time, hope your feeling better soon!! Good job

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-08-02 08:17 AM


LiLi...I agree with Deb.  The laughter will come.  Good work here.  Hardrock
Lynne Dale
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
3 posted 2000-08-02 09:58 AM


This is a godd poem. Hope the heartaches eases soon.
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-08-02 10:37 AM


Oh wow!  This was really heart warming for me to read.  Maybe cause I have been there and got the damn t-shirt from it too many times.  But HEY.... he must of not been your destiny.  So smile a little..... your soulmate is out there waiting for you.  

Peace
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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