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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
~pain~ Creeping through the shadows cast upon the ground Stirring the delicate haven of the unborn Darkness falls, nite conquers all Crawling helplessly, searching drastically Stuck inside a house of horrors Trapped, with no way out Running, falling, failing Murmers heard in the distance Closer now, vioces quite loud Paralyzed from the waist down I reach up for your hand Yet you once again, toss me aside A mere nothing in your life Breathing deeply, eyes darting from left to right Arms grasped and twisted behind Mouth shut with tape, suffocating Hear the locking of the restraints Feel my soul melt away,from inside my body Being dragged out of this place Being pulled away form you Watching myself die on the spot Eyes never leaving your own Tearz staind and smeared Being shoved into a desolate room Huddling into a far corner All this insanity, all this madness just for you God, i really hate this I knew they'd never understand I do not wish to live like this any longer I am a burden to this world I wish to leave for i am, nothing. ~MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
how depressing and desolate...but remember time heals all pain, and so does poetry...after all, poetry is therapy for the soul...keep your head up.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hey ... First of all ... this is utterly depressing ... Vivid imagery though. Welcome to Passions! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
ECK!  Now that was depressing.  Hey we arent all bad inside. Keep your chin up, things shall get better soon. Once you give up hope, then all shall come to an end. We are here... we care... and we arent all puter nerds! (haha)BTW nice way of expressing yourself! DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i am there with you, in the cage next to yours. this is soooooooooooooo good!!! i share your pain. you express it well, which is painful within itself. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
thanx dark kisses within for ur reply...and advice....thank you kynder for o so liking my poem! so kind are all of you,...much love. ~MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
You are Divine....and so is your poem. Great expression of the frustration of life and love. There is hope...even if it comes tomorrow, there is hope. Until then..stay with us awhile. Hardrock |
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