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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Thank you all so much for all the nice things you have to say about my writing. Here's another one. it isnt one of my favorites, but maybe you will enjoy it. Loving you 6-17-2000 Sitting all alone Listening to "Trust" Waiting for a call Wishing you would believe Wanting only you Thinking about how I feel Feeling so alone Understanding you don't want this Knowing I want you Hoping you care Missing your kisses Needing something more Crying over you Holding your little racoon Being cold and alone Telling myself it will be o.k. Realizing it never will be Loving you..... p.s. trust is one of my favorite cure songs, if you would like the words here they are. There is no one left in the world that i can hold onto There is really no one left there is only you and if you leave me now you leave all that we once were undone There is really no one left you are the only one And still the hardest part for you is to put your trust in me I love you more than words can say why won't you just believe. I love that song if any of you wanted to know [This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
So true, letting go while holding on tightly. I have been where you are. Trust that this too shall pass leaving in it's wake love and light again. Life is not a spectator Sport! Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Gin..very well done!! I really like this. Good job. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i adore the cure. in fact i now feel the need to go dust off my copies of their stuff. you have a great talent. never doubt it. all poems are great simply becuz you wrote it. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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