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Ode' To An Idiot
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Ode' To An Idiot |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
With a whispering scream I call out Your name. Soulful fingers reach for You With a scoff You turn away. Shallow, contrite.. Nothing to say. With My love as Your empowering rescource You play.. Your callous, leathally wounding mind games. Some day when Your'e on the receiving end You'll reach out desperately needing a friend. All the hearts you have broken will have then turned to stone. You'll feel destitute, old, and at last, all alone. ~O.K...I feel better now!LOL I'm retracting My claws as I type!~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
What an aweseome job. You have brought meaning to the word dark passions. Make sure to keep those claws clean alright.  LOLRonil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Meoooow!!! (LOL) this was really good at good to get those feeling out!!!! thanks for sharing The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yeow!!! I do like your style....me purring quite serenely now....loved it. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Hmmm..was your name Sash..or Slash? No, must be Sash, cause Slash is still with G & R. Even I feel better after this venting. Hardrock |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Well put!! I always did admire your wikked style with words!!! Good poem!! Click |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You tell it like it is. Don't we all hope for the "idiot" who left us to end up alone and lonely? (at least?)Well I do anyway. Thanks this was a great vent, tempting to anonymously send it to a few men I know.. LOL Catalinamoon |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yup! An idiot indeed. Tell him what he deserves to know! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Holy Mackeral!!! Awesome vent. "Your callous, leathally wounding mind games.",...extremely pounding with disgust and power. Great work. Be well S. *Peace. |
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