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Glass Beaded Gateways
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Glass Beaded Gateways |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Glass Beaded Gateways Glass beaded gateways and tangled twine in times. 'Round and binding. Dripping droplets down, settling dust of wines, feathery light. Flickering calmness and burning regulations in stone cradles. Amber gloss and ashes gray, in hours of putting you away. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spit Fire your poetry continues to dazzle me, this is an amazing piece. Beautiful images. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SpitFire.... I'm with Brian on this one....the pictures in my mind as I read were so great!! Keep it up!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dazzling, you are...y'know, I search you out to read just because of the remarkable imagery that you use...keep 'em coming, Spitfire, I do so enjoy your work! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you all for taking the time. I know it seems that I only visit here occasionally in Open,...but trust me...I am reading and there are just soOo many incredible poets here. It's tough keeping up with everyone. ~Brian and Serenity,...thanks for always reading me. I know that you two have been willing to throw a bib on and click on my writings, so thank you for that. Hehaa. ~Sunny,...thank you dear for stopping by and replying. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, Amazing my friend!!! You have such a talent for drawing the most awesome pictures. Love this one!! Sorry we keep missing each other, but we will catch up soon...I promise. Take care you.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous imagery! You have such talent...keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ I LIKE this ! ! 'Amber gloss and ashes gray, in hours of putting you away' Neat imagery. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Don't forget to count yourself amongst those incredible poets. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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