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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
My Heart aches at such a pace I'll never let you go. The clock strikes midnight I must soon go home. My heart races in time as I think of the hours we made love. Such tingles went down my spine You were so kind and gentle to me. My mind goes to you Even as I drive down the road wanting to turn back and fall in your arms The clock keeps ticking so I must go. My soul yearns for you. Soon I will be consumed by all of you. Your body knows my body Your lips know my every part As I work today I will be dreaming of you Your so gifted with your hands the way they make me feel. When I get home tonight I will be wanting you again Yet to be with you is for a short while. I couldn't live without you For you are my light within my soul. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosebud.... I loved this one....it's happy, and sexy, and just makes you feel good to read!!! Thank you for this one! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Sunny1 said it all, but I must add what a wonderful feeling it truly is to be so amazingly involved with someone. Oh the memories... lol More to come... I hope. lol  Nice job.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ A delightful read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Rosebud...if I didn't know better I would have thought you were thinking of me when you wrote this!!LOL! Seroiusly though I thought this was so very well written and very touching....you are obviously very much in love! Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx so much for replies. Love is ever consuming( a burning flame) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such loving tenderness spoken from the wealth of love....beautiful creation you share today.  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Mark I also enjoy reading your poems, words say so much of the inner soul. Sometimes I believe we don't know ourselves as well as we believe. In looking at my poetry sometimes I'm amazed when I go back and read, sometimes just depends on how I feel that day. |
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