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A Magical Moment.
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A Magical Moment. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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You were saying... the things you miss about Love once you've experienced it it left your life on the wings of a dove once you appreciated it You were asking... (with a smile) How come in all the years from the beginning of our friendship how come through all the tears and happiness that re-mends it You wondered... How come through all this and how close we've always been and with the occasional friendly kiss from friend to loving friend... I said... And all the times we cried together when the other needed a shoulder to whisk away on eagles feather in weakness, each others boulder... We smiled... I've always liked you just never really said me too, but never thought to say even slept in each others bed We paused... But nothing ever happened did you ever wonder why? we never got distracted... in all the many times We stopped... And just sort of sat there looking into each others eyes then something started to happen of all things, I got the butterflies You moved... And without a second thought leanded forward and gave me a kiss I could'nt think or move or talk it never felt quite like this... Time froze... Our lips together, just barely touching eyes closed and nothing to say... opened our eyes to see each other blushing but niether pulled far away It happened again... I grew weak in the knees my heart began to flutter I think I hit 200 degrees I felt weak, like melting butter Again we paused... Backed up, eyes wide, gazing deep "I've never felt like this before" "me niether, kinda funny, and very weak" holding hands, trembling, with this friend I adore Together, at the same moment, while we were exchanging smiles we looked at the other and said... "I Love you" in a way we never have before.< !signature--> Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I'm not sure how I want to respoond to this It hit me on so many different levels.... I can't really explain what came over me while I was reading it. It created a perdect picture for me, it was so real and honest and true... I guess the only thing to say is that I really really enjoyed this one... Great writing, can't wait to read more. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Awwwwww, this is so very honest and with a truly happy ending. Lasting realasionships are built on friendship......you are way ahead here. The way you tell this is indeed like you are right there. Thank you for sharing this beautiful experience with all of us. I could feel my heart flutter right along with you as I read. You have made my heart smile! Jenn E |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
We paused We stopped... Time froze... We kissed... and from then on you never had to wonder again my friend ~~soft hearted hugs M |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Isnt it funny how you can find the best love right when you least expect it? And in the eyes of your friend? |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all so very much for your kind replies. This is a new topic for me... lol. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
LOL... Maureen, I did'nt pick up on the hidden meaning in your reply 'till just now :P LOL Time will tell... what will happen, when, if, all those. SUCH HEADACHES!!! LOL J/K Thank you ;D Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThUnDeRkYsS~ No matter what happens in your future - you will always remember this moment. You wrote of it very sincerely. Such an enjoyment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very beautiful peice you have written, yes I agree with Marge.....a moment like this is very rare....you have expressed it wonderfully.....Great read!!  Julie :) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
If only we could capture a moment like this and put it inside a bottle to use everyday like perfume, so the fragrance of the moment would last forever!!! Wonderful poem!!!Sometimes we have love there right before our eyes without knowing it... |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was magic was very lovely and so romantic. I loved the friendship that blossomed into love. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh geeeeze, all I know to give you is one long **breathless sigh** to show you how much I liked this! Talk about poetic romantic perfection...I am definately keeping an eye out for more of your work, this is the first one I've read of yours...I've been gone awhile, but it's poetry like this that makes me glad to be back! **sigh again!** Btw, I really liked the way you styled and formatted your stanzas...it really added to the way this read - almost like I could feel the "pause" between the couple, and the magic...Wow. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Let me rephrase...first one of yours I've read since I got back online, which it's been awhile, and not to mention that you only grace us with your works from time to time, not nearly enough! LOL MORE! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Absolutely, breathtakingly beautiful! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
IHope You don't mind me saying this...but you remind me of THE GREATEST AMERICAN HERO...(I use to watch that show alot...Ps..I had a crush on William Katt...Believe it or not I am flying on air..I never thought I could feel so free....Believe it or not... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Whew.......what a tale!! Friends often make the best lovers...overlooking what is in front of you for so long....who better to love than a friend that knows you so well...fantastic writing!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge ~ Yes, I dont think I COULD ever forget that moment, and much has happened since then, not sure for better or worse... but none-the-less I remember that moment as if it were yesterday. Thank you for your kind words  JulieAnn ~ Thank you, very rare, yes. I think there was enough feeling in that one moment to last a lifetime though. lol A Romantic Heart ~ Tell me about it... Thank you Rosebud1229 ~ Thank you for kind reply, I'm glad you liked it  poetFemmeFatale ~ Thank you, Thank you! Been a while, yes... I'm glad you liked it, always happy to hear such kind words coming from one as yourself Gemini ~ Thank you much! A Romantic Heart ~ I dont mind, no... Although I really could'nt anyways, seeing I'm not familiar with that show  Thank You Butterflies ~ I'll agree with you without commenting on the rest...  But yes, I do agree... so much more feeling it seems like. Thank you much Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, thunder, this was quite a story! It seem so genuine and your sincerity was as good as it gets. This is an excellent piece and thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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