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HM3
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0 posted 2000-07-31 10:52 PM


Just beyond the stars, my spirit waits for you
Above the horizon, where the light beams thru
As I wait and wonder, how long it might be
I bask in the light of the love that set me free

Looking at the colours, enchanted by the shine
I thank God above, he put your heart in mine

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...




[This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 08-02-2000).]

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Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2000-08-01 12:20 PM


so much said in so few words..beautiful absolutely beautiful

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poutprincess
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2 posted 2000-08-02 03:52 AM


this is truly lovely.....and touching...good job!
notlikely2
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3 posted 2000-08-02 04:03 AM


HM3 I know exactly how you feel.
It as wonderful when He gives someone to us in this way. Show your gratitude by loving them completely.

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4 posted 2000-08-02 07:51 AM


HM3~
One heart, safely nestled in another ...
what a lovely thought.
~*Marge*~


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Jenova
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germany
5 posted 2000-08-02 08:18 AM


Beautiful... this is absolutely touching my soul... and I adore expressions like "beyond the stars"... that makes me dream... *closes her eyes*
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