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topnotch707
Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16
vallejo, cali, usa

0 posted 2000-08-02 04:53 AM


Will you marry me?
I really need to know.
Why can't we be together
instead of letting go.
Will you marry me?
so we can be as one
we can add onto our family
you can be a father to my son.
Will you marry  me?
and stick by my side.
I've loved you from the start
I've never cheated or lied.
Will you marry me?
I love you so much
I don't know what to do
without your loving touch.
Will you marry me?
please say I do.
I promise to love and cherish
and be a good wife to you.

-Rebecca Vieu (C)



© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Vieu - All Rights Reserved
sosweet82
Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17
Phoenix, AZ
1 posted 2000-08-02 05:00 AM


If any man would say no to that he would be crazy! That was great!  
Samantha Saban

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-08-02 08:12 AM


This almost makes me want to marry you...very strong and sincere message...James
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-08-02 10:00 AM


Welcome to the family! Nice way to enter our home (but you may want to hold off posting all your poems at once, so we have a chance to read them one or two at a time!)..anyway, check your email for a special greeting!  
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