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An emptiness unknown, the birth of a new life
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An emptiness unknown, the birth of a new life |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
An emptiness unknown, The birth of a new life My love, how true indeed you have showed me what it means when thy heart bleeds how vacuously empty my world is left to be where many days have passed, when you are not to be seen. Before you my love, it was never like this days were assumed happy ice cream cones were bliss. girls at the park I dared not kiss and Christmas time was only for Christmas gifts. so, how was I to know something was a miss? how was I to know your love transcends distance? From a chat room you came, it was fine with me, friends we became in March I believe life was the same Oh how was I deceived life was very different as you shall soon see... A seed of friendship bore into a bud of love watered with time and fate shone from above a combination which makes only the heart drum is how I fell so passionately in love. And we met and we touched and we had our time but before that day was over one thing came to mind our love was true purely divine and when you left how sad was I longing for your touch longing for more time my heart was broken, shattered, and maligned what was I to do my heart was no longer mine On many occasions tears only cover this face an emptiness has built in the broken heart's space but now that I feel it there is no mistake I now have a new life to share with my love Jase. [This message has been edited by JnR4eva (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Hi to all. This is my second poem on this site and I believe that I would love to become part of this community for a good amount of time. Thus meaning, I would like to post many more poems, even though I have only a handful at the time lol. I never considered myself to be a poet but everybody here is so welcoming that I think I have had a change of heart.  I had such a wonderful audience for my first poem and I thank them very much. Whomever may read this, I hope you enjoy this poem as well. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW lots of images there... and well expressed too... regards, sudhir |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Thank you Sudhir for your very kind words |
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