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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-08-08 07:06 PM


The mists are slowly gatherin’-
Wi’ the comin’ o’ the eve.
I ‘ear the wind a rustlin’-
Midst the undergrowth an’ leaves.

An’ me fire is dancin’ merrily-
My lean-to warm an’ snug.
Me roastin’ rabbit’s near to done,
I still ‘ave ‘alf a jug.

Ah, the years they seem to shimmer-
An’ they seem to pass away...
An’ Faith! ‘tis like I am na ‘ere,
But dwell in bygone days.

When I were but a youngster-
Wi’ a canny blade, an’ ‘and...
An’ soljerin’, it were me trade,
In many climes an’ lands.

Aye, I’ve ‘eard the wild geese cryin’
As they’re wingin’ over ‘ead.
An’ the vultures sayin’ grace, ye ken,
Ere they stoop to eat the dead.

An’ I’ve ‘eard the banshee wailin’-
As ‘e ‘eralds comin’ doom.
An’ the snick o’ blades...the groans o’ death,
At night, an’ in the noon.

An’ me evil deeds outweigh the good-
As I gaze back down the trail...
Does tomorrow bring a reckonin’?
And end me Traveler’s Tale?


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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-08-08 07:12 PM


looks like ye been around mister slinger and picked up a mighty fine dialect yuh o yuh  
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
2 posted 2000-08-08 07:19 PM


wonderful read...can hear that accent loud and clear
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-08-08 09:18 PM


"An’ the vultures sayin’ grace, ye ken,
Ere they stoop to eat the dead."

Gunslinger ~ you've the classic heart for poetic tellin' dear sir. This is superb, and beyond.

~ Claire


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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4 posted 2000-08-13 07:28 PM


Superb indeed!

Denise

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
5 posted 2000-08-13 10:44 PM


I hope these tales never end!!!  Only you GS....only you    Great work~
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2000-08-13 10:58 PM


You keep on proving that the poem you wrote about not being a full fledged poet is entirely untrue......this is wonderful work!
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