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courtney923
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0 posted 2000-08-03 12:47 PM


Sorrow fills me, weak
Trying hard, but it's all bleak
I don't know, but still I seek
Looked inside, but did not peek
Upon my head, lies a scene
Painted of gold, and chilled for weeks
Fill the glass, of all it's rage
Overflow my thoughts, and find it free
Binded by, a vacant dream
Of hopes that mask, and hearts that bleed
This hunger I feel, piercing my mind
A chisel couldn't break, the sheet of steel
Around my sole, but I'm not whole
Giving into darkness, just letting go
Like the wilted flower, burning in the sun
Somehow I wonder, if I'm really done

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1 posted 2000-08-03 01:02 AM


Awesome word usuage. Great poem!!! Keep it up.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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2 posted 2000-08-03 01:02 AM


Awesome word usuage. Great poem!!! Keep it up.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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