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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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-favorites- freestyle My favorite color is the ocean. My favorite flower is the wide open sky. I will outlast any sickness you throw my way Until the day I die. My favorite psalm is the one where people sing. My favorite love is the smile you bring. My favorite sad song is your ring. My favorite anger is the book we wrote together. My favorite color is the sky over the ocean. My favorite sigh is the mud near the shore. My favorite memory is when we loved each other. My favorite death was when you shut the door. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
many of my favorite reads are by a black squirrel  very cool poem... very cool imagery and metaphor very touching emotions as well later-fav-poet-gator me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love it! I love the play on words here, this is great!! <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Simple and effective Mike. I enjoyed this alot. Cool poem. Hugs. LOL. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mike, my favorite poetic puzzler. Your work always has such an impact. Liked this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Janet, Thanks, Janet. (I know, that was redundant. eh) I appreciate it muchly.  WhtDove, Merci beaucoup. I forced myself to write a poem while I was in the middle of a fever ("You're a sagitarrius, all right," one of my friends told me), and this came out from my head into the tape recorder as is. s'en, Hugs back; glad you enjoyed. Claire, Thanks, Claire. How's it going with you these days? Mike |
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