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Cupid's Arrow
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Cupid's Arrow |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Struck by cupid's arrow As they stroll across the floor. And rainbows stream aross the sky As hearts begin to soar. Basking in the moonlight Beneath the endless skies. Reaching perfect harmony As predicted in their eyes. The calmness of the night air Puts music in their heart. Swaying to the rhythm They whisper in the dark. Dancing in the moonlight, Finding comfort in the stars. The night was full of magic As they wished upon a star. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Eloise! Lovely!!  Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Denise. Appreciate the read. |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Very nice and well written..took me to that special place!!!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Eloise, This is most beautiful.... nice work... regards, sudhir |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Bustem, glad you enjoyed it. Sudhir, your comments always mean so much. Thank you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Enchanting! I can picture it, as I'm twirling underneath the stars! This is beautifully written!! <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
he seems to be everywhere....that little cupid man....i liked this alot....great post!!! Julie :) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful poem Eloise ... very lovely flow in this piece. I just signed up myself and the mister for tango and swing dance classes (now if he can only learn to float as sweetly as you described)! Nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Oh, what pretty, pretty thoughts. 'The calmness of the night air Puts music in their heart. Swaying to the rhythm They whisper in the dark.' Oooh, la la ! I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
WhtDove, thank you and I do hope you enjoyed your dance under the stars.  Thanks Julie, and yes I think he's everywhere tonight! Thank you for your comments Kit, and let us know if he floats lol. Thanks Marge. I'm glad you liked it. Somehow I knew you would. |
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