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Dance With Me Like Butterflies
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Dance With Me Like Butterflies |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Dance With Me Like Butterflies Fresh dew has kissed the flower bed, As early sun brings forth the day. And songful birds, Begin to play. And I think of you... The gentle night begins to fall. Bright stars peek out to say hello. The tender moon, Makes all aglow. And I think of you... Whisper to me your poetic song. Breathe words of love to my eager soul. Pen my heart with lovers lines. And dance with me like butterflies. This is dedicated to a very special friend of mine ~~~He knows who he is~~~ and to the sweet love in his life. May their love continue to bloom into beautiful gardens. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a nice gift to your friend, Juliet! Beautiful pictures! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Elizabeth, hes come to be so special to me. Thank you so much for the kind words. Juls |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
So much said, in just a few lines... and wow to... "Whisper to me your poetic song. Breathe words of love to my eager soul.". Fantastic!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Lady, you're so sweet. Thank you so much. Juls |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
So tender, so soft, so very beautiful. Simply lovely Juls, what a great friend you are to write such sweetness for them. Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Thank you Bonnie and it was indeed my pleasure. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Juls-you honor your friend deeply and I just hope that he appreciates you as much as you seem to appreciate him. This is one sweet love poem and it is going in my private library. These lines are pure poetic grace and soon to be classics I am sure. Absoulutely beautiful.   Fresh dew has kissed the flower bed, As early sun brings forth the day. Pen my heart with lovers lines. And dance with me like butterflies. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Mark, I'm sure he appreciates me just as much as I do him. And your words, they're so wonderful and flatter me much. But the praise goes to this inspiring couple, you might even say, they gave poetic life. Juls |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Absolutely exquisite!! I have a special soft spot for butterflies...but even if that weren't the case this piece would still be beautiful. Great writing~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great Juls. . . just wonderful. . . a very touching tribute. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ What lovely verse. 'Whisper to me your poetic song. Breathe words of love to my eager soul. Pen my heart with lovers lines. And dance with me like butterflies.' Muchly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Butterflies, thank you. And I agree, those tiny delicate creatures are very awesome. Wishing you all the best, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven, thanks so much. Again you're so kind. Take care, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge, let me begin by saying, thanks so much for the help you gave me. It's so appreciated. And then thank you for your as always kind words. Take care, Juls |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Simply beautiful, one of the best I've seen! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow EagleOne, I'm overwhelmed and so shocked by your reply. What a truly lovely thing to say. Thank you so much. Juls |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
..this is so very lovely.. wonderful imagery... tender emotions... very nice. very. take care jm =============== The gentle night begins to fall. Bright stars peek out to say hello. The tender moon, Makes all aglow. And I think of you... Whisper to me your poetic song. Breathe words of love to my eager soul. Pen my heart with lovers lines. And dance with me like butterflies. ***********************  There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Janet, that is so lovely. You touched me deeply here. Thanks so much. Juls |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This poem is absolutely lovely! What a pleasant request you make so poetically perfect Liz |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Liz, as always you're so kind. Thanks so much. Juls |
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