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I Came Back For A Kiss...my 1000th post
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I Came Back For A Kiss...my 1000th post |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
They spent their time that night quietly talking About another friends sorrow and pain Taking comfort in each other Secure in what they share I have to go now he softly whispered Tenderly touching her face She stayed a moment longer gazing up at the sky Then she felt his warmth surround her And his breath caressing her ear She turned a question in her eyes I came back for a kiss. And passion flared between them At his softly whispered words I came back for a kiss And his arms pulled her close His eyes holding hers in his passionate stare I came back for a kiss But that kiss led to something that neither expected A lovers dance in the shadow of the moon The taste of his lips The beat of her heart I came back for a kiss POUNCE...all the dedication this one needs |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW of love with love so lovely... Many congrats for the 1  posts, each of them have been great to read ... poems and response both alikeregards to you Paula, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Congrat's Paula.....you hit 1000 in style! Great writing~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful way to announce 1000...such a positive not...great piece...loved it... "I came back for a kiss". Classic. jwesley |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula...... Many warm-hearted congratulations! I have enjoyed all of your poems so much and this one is just beautiful. I love the ending.......... You always write with style!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic setting Paula and I love the title. I wish you many many more wonderful posts and CONGRATS on your 1000th it is a real gem, something to be proud of. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Congratulations...and great poem  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A tender kiss can warm the soul...nice 1000...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Congrads on the landmark 1000st poest and also for marking it with a beautifully written poem. wonderful writing. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
 WhoooHooo!!!!! Congrats Paula on this finely penned poem,... how badly I wish to be kisses now ( sigh ) ...lol I'll get over it...once again Congradulations for hitting 1000 with a ((BANG)) "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
a Grand poem to commemerate your first grand |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Congratulations on your 1000th post. I have enjoyed your writing very much and here is another one to add. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Congratulations on hitting 1000!!! And such a sweet and dreamy piece...I could use a little of this kind of, um, inspiration... Smiles to you, Paula. 'Tis lovely indeed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
congrats girl...you got to a 1000 PDQ!!! and yes...i have to agree with sen... i could use some inspiration like this too... very romantic sweet poem... we all need a kiss now and then... here's to 2000... take care jm |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Paula! Congratulations on 1,000!!! What a beautifully tender and romantic poem to celebrate this milestone with! Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Congratulations Paula...Wonderful, sensual poem! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow-1000 with poetic grace and style....your poetry is growing well. Congrats on your milestone. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Paula, Congratulations on the 1000th. What a milestone that must be! However, ahhh-I certainly sat back and enjoyed what you have written. Sooooo nice! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a perfect millenial post and a line i won't forget ~G~ - wonderful poem Paula |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Paula Congrats - maybe someday I will have that many. Great poem - very gentle and sensuous. didi |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How do I even begin to say thank you to all of you for your continuing support and guidance and love? All of you have made my time here a gift to be treasured and created memories that will last a lifetime. Thank you |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Congratulations, Paula! Beautiful poem! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I have enjoyed having you here through the 1000 !!!! Hope to read many more of your posts and sweet replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Congradulations on your 1,000th post! And from the looks of it, you've grown into a great writer, Paula. Cheers to you and to many more poems from the tip of your pen! Nathan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
1000 wonderful thoughts ... some of them read several times Can I come back for a kiss? |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
a beautiful poem, Paula... congratulations and cheers to you Tony |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Denise...thank you Marge...your continuing support is gladly welcomed thank you Nathan...thank you Rex...what a compliment...and you can come back any time  Tony...thank you [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Paula this is really something. Absolutely gorgeous girl. Congrats on that 1000!!!! Juls |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wow, that was too cool, Paula. So beautiful! I loved it! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Juliet...thanks for reading Saunni...thank you for you kind words |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wow Paula, what a way to hit a 1000. This was great*sigh*. Congrats.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kitkat...thanks for the sigh |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Congratulations! Celebrated in fine style.I look forward you being around for another 1000. take care! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...thank you and I am looking forward to 1000 more. Now I can do what I needed to do and thank each of you who have replied individually. Sudhir...you have been here with kind and encouraging words right from the start...thank you Holly...your encouragement has carried me many a day...thanks jwesley...thank you for all your sweet words Sunny1...you have always encouraged, praised, and just plain made me feel good abt my writing...thank you ethome my friend...where would I be with out the praise you shower on me each and every time you read one of my poems...thank you hoot_owl_rn...thank you James...yes it can...and other things as well...thank you Brian...thanks coming from you thats high praise indeed JnR4eva...kisses will come...thanks Jamie...thank you brown eyes as always you say the sweetest things Eloise...thank you I am glad you enjoy my writing serenity...yes it was ummmmm inspired...I'd share but NAH I dont think I will...thanks JM...this one was inspired Jan...sweetly too..thank you for always being here for me. Kit...thank you you have been there with kind and gentle words all along. Martie...easy to be sensual when the story is a KISS...thank you Mark...thanks cowboy...ever forward on to 2000 hehehe Bill...well thank you sir...I'm glad you enjoyed the kiss Wil my friend...thank you so much and I look forward to our attempt ddgoose...it feels like it will never come then one day you are saying WHOA...dont worry it will happen...thanks Again I want to say thank you for all the continuing love and support as I spread these poets wings and soar on Passions wind. |
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