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Stripper
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Stripper |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Stripper The room is dark with a dim light Lights come on to show this beautiful sight The sound of soft music playing I had to sit closer without saying As the first piece came off I smiled I've been waiting for this for a while For this beautiful sight to reveal Beneath it's beauty so real The curves and shapes of a dream Firm and strong it would seem I reached to rub how smooth it was Decided to wait just because Those long legs showed strength Peeled to the end of there length I couldn't believe what I was seeing Sending shivers throughout my being My eyes glued as my hands shook A pleasing beauty with a gorgeous look A little time, hard work with lots of care And a good paint stripper to refinish this chair |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh how utterly......naughty...you really had me going never say never |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
LOL, what a tease!!! Cool poem! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
heheheheh--fooled me too |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ROFL--you should open a window when you use that stuff...but then again, wouldn't want to spoil the fun!!! too cute, insect...you know I love this humor!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw you devil you....hooked me right away. I knew there was going to be something ..but not that.....that was so much fun..well done! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Paula Finn…Thanks But she looks so gorgeous stripped down bare! LOL Toddles…Thank you Glad to make you laugh! kitkat…She is a beautiful chair! Thanks serenity…Thanks The more I used the prettier she was! I better open the window!! LOL ethome…Excellent! Love when other poets have fun with my poetry! Thank you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just gotta love a good tease. Are you wearing your paint mask...them fumes can get to you. Fun and wonderful write. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I think the fumes have gone to your head  ...they do have warning lables on that stuff ya know! Great tease! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Insect, You had me fooled with the rest of them! You made me laugh..hehe.  rosepetals25 |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Mark Bohannan…Thannnkkss Sssomebody oppeen tthhee wwiinnn….zzzzzzzz!! Butterflies_don't_cry…Zzzzzzzzzzzzz!Snort!Zzzzzzzzz! rosepetals25…Thanks Glad to make you laugh! I've had a good laugh too! Thanks for all the responses (MB, B_d_c )LOL's |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Now, this was a rare treat. Love being railroaded then hit with a sly left hook. Lady Nogs |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Lady Noggins…Thank you for your response And a wonderful one at that! Welcome to Passions  |
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Denali Silverwolf Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 11 |
 laughs Beautiful, just beautiful. I absolutely <3 loved <3 it! |
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AMaZing Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 10 |
*S* Great work again!! Loved It!! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hook, line and sinker.... I swallowed it. You're tricky... I loved it. Do it to me again Linda M. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Denali Silverwolf…Thank you for the rolling smiles Happy to hear you laugh! * Welcome to passions AMaZing…Thank you my friend! Still looking for your poem?? linda munday…Go fish! Thanks a lot !! |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
That was mean...but clever, I must admit. Cute poem "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
That one took me solid. Good laugh and good writing - what a combination. Thanks. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I just love your sense of humor ..it's wonderful ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
jennie may*…You may* be right about that! Thanks for responding! Eddie de Jong…I'm glad you had a good laugh! I knew it was going to be fun for some! Thank you MMoonchild…Thank you Maureen That's very nice of you to say I will try to send out more humor but it usually comes out in many different ways for me. Love to make people laugh!! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! You enjoyed striping that chair as much as I enjoyed my vanilla ice cream ...lol.That was great!! I loved it!! To the top again you go!!! kat |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh My...you nasty thing you... I am likin it! :PJenn E |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
kat…Thank you Would you like to sit in the chair my Lioness kat? Purr! Purr! Jenn E…Thank you "Nasty" I'm liken it!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOHHHHHHH Im so glad I found this again...its just as good the second time thru |
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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
LOL...I love teasing poems like this! It's always fun to have a break from emotional stress, and read a fun, humorous poem. Thanks for sharing! Hope you don't mind if I share your poem with my friends. With much love, Mel  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
ROTFL...excellent!!!!! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Paula Finn…Come as many times as you like I'll just keep stripping! MelissaL…You sure can share this! Just dim the lights for me would ya! Here I go again!! EagleOne…Glad you had a good laugh! I'm happy to see reply's like this!! |
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