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HelmutB
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0 posted 2000-02-08 02:23 PM


A little birdie came to me
He said to drop a line for thee
I looked at him and smiled aloft
You mean that gentleperson I know "she's like a Dove"
That's right he whistled in my ear
And that's why you find this line in here
Hope you're well and as far as I can tell
May your day be swell

HelmutB  



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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Michael
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1 posted 2000-02-08 02:32 PM


HelmutB, you are so cool.  If all wasn't sweel with WhtDove i'm sure all will be when she sees you were thinking of her.  Cute little poem...


Michael

Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 2000-02-08 02:33 PM


Wonderful poem for a wonderful person!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


sandgrain
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3 posted 2000-02-08 08:45 PM


That's so sweet. Thanks, Wht. Dove's Mom
devina
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4 posted 2000-02-08 08:48 PM


There you go Helmut...showing your sweet side again!!! Cute poem!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-02-08 08:58 PM


Aw..she's going to love this! It's nice Helmut!  

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-02-08 10:58 PM


Awww! Thanks so much Helmut! This is the nicest thing I've had all day! Thank you for such a sweet poem!   They're right I love it!      

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

HelmutB
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7 posted 2000-02-09 06:33 AM


It was me who had to say
And send a "Thank you" out your way
A little birdie told me so
That little birdie knows this too
The little birdie was so right and knew
It's for the valentines poem wrote by you
Thank you

My heart felt "Thank you" to all of you
Michael, Echo Rhayne, a sandgrain (your welcome mom) , Devina and Poet deVine



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-02-09 03:08 PM


its like do the dew yuh gotta love the dove
WhtDove
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9 posted 2000-02-09 06:04 PM


LOL, thanks Walt!  Helmut you're very welcome, and I'm honored that you wanted to use it!  

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Nan
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10 posted 2000-02-09 10:13 PM


well, someone who deserves it is really appreciated...
HelmutB
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11 posted 2000-02-10 05:27 AM


Thank you for your cute comments
Walty dew to

WhtDove
Valentine will be different thanks to you

Nan
I think so

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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