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Open Poetry #6

Only She Will Ever Know

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-08 06:37 PM

It’s nice to live in a world
Without a doubt
That she is the girl
I cannot live without

As long as she needs me
And changes never
I’m thinking of her only
And giving her forever
Only she really knows
My heart’s special place
Where my thoughts sometimes go
And can never be replaced

Wherever she may run
I know I’ll be there
With her, the one
Who’s life I share
All she has to do is ask
And I’ll fall upon my knees
So she can remove this mask
And the little pieces of me

Tonight the lightning strikes
And a new wind blows
Bringing a certain calm she likes
That only she will ever know

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-02-08 06:43 PM

Excellent poem, I love the part about removing the mask. It is true that only those we truly love can see us for who we truly are.

I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-02-09 09:32 AM

JML, you did it to me again, you melted my heart! This is so sweet!

-SEA

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2000-02-09 09:38 AM

SEA - I'm sorry about the melting, hope it isn't messy *S*.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

4 posted 2000-02-09 03:44 PM

I agree with Mistikman's comments. I would add that we show more of ourselves to those we truly love, because real love opens the heart and mind.
Nice Poem!
Danny

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-02-09 04:35 PM

You've fallen hard haven't you???? hehe...this is lovely!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

6 posted 2000-02-09 05:04 PM

this is a great poam i would have to agree with everyone else

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

7 posted 2000-02-10 04:59 AM

So well said JML

Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

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