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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2000-02-22 04:45 PM


You know it's right
to hold me tight
with all your might
all through the night.

Your cold feet
don't give much heat,
but your kiss is sweet
and so i feel complete.

I'd walk a mile
through a snow pile
to stay awhile
and see your smile.

Our dreams of old
can still be bold
for the future holds
many "Fields of Gold."

(written for my sweetie on our 5th month anniversary, (FEb. 18, 2000) he decided our song would be Fields of Gold, by the Police)< !signature-->

 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

[This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 02-22-2000).]

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mystery
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 79

1 posted 2000-02-22 04:54 PM


It seems to be that you have something really special, hold on to it dear!!!!

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-23 01:57 PM


The dreams of old can still unfold
when love is new and both are true.
Enjoyed your poem,
Danny

Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
3 posted 2000-02-23 02:44 PM


I liked that, thanks Danny
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