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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
What do i see ? , a bunch of nothing and a group of what ifs , what if i knew the right words what if i sang the right tune but , theres a lifetime of more to come . what do i hear ? , muffled voices and the occasional inward scream , do i want these words , do i want the hollars , no choice . What do i say ? ..... ......nothing |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Cabey Baby, I wish there was something I could do or say that would help you get rid of your inner (and outer) termoil, but there is not, if there was we'd both be ok.... For now we cannot give up....do NOT let them beat us. love Lou xxx  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I se it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Thankyou for all that you said yesterday. You made me feel so secure...  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
hi friends, this is one of my favourites. please tell me what you think... |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great cabes, I liked this very much, how are you write now ? I haven't talked to you for ages . I have often thought to my self - What if . If you get like this at all just think that if you could change something, the affect it would have on you and where you are now, you have many friends and they all care for you as deeply as I do . L.of.L. Tom With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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