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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-04-14 04:27 AM

The crime of love

The truth of love is that it’s crime,
Illegal,
Bad,
Taboo,
People who commit this sin are evil,
Yes it’s true .
Confession can appease the soul,
But the lies come shining through,
Your heart is locked eternally,
In a small cell made for two .
You can’t break free,
You can’t escape,
No matter how you try,
The sentence is so long and hard,
Make that life times 5 .
If you try to get away,
It will all rush back to you,
You cannot lose the thin blue lines,
That travel two by two .
The lines just close around your neck,
Back to the lonely cell,
Your left alone with just your thoughts,
Your life’s a living hell .
Some loves are only minor,
A stupid crush or fling,
In court these crimes,
Will bear small charge,
A lonely monthly thing,
But when the love is purist,
Good,
And right,
And true,
The charge is hard upon your head,
There’s no where to run to .
What’s this I hear you asking,
How’d you bloody know ?
The answer is quite simpleton,
It’s plain,
And I will tell,
My punishment is hard and long,
With my whole life to serve,
Cannot you,
Find the agony,
I have because of love ?

Written by Tom Baker .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-14 05:25 AM

Clever -- glad you can see the humor
in these things. This flows great and
I enjoyed the analogy of love.

Teresa King
www.tipsfortop.com

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2000-04-14 07:22 AM

Thankyou netswan, all my poetry has some kind of link to love, usualy lack of or to much ! your reply made me feel a little bit better, I am glad you liked it .
Stay Lucky Tom .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

infinat3 sadn3ss
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 85
somerset england

3 posted 2000-04-14 09:36 AM

well tom , if the dictionary had a definion for love , this should be it ! . sarcasm is the only way to fight the pain .

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2000-05-08 06:03 AM

Cheers cabes, you always see things my way, I glad atleast one person understands what it is like . I suppose most people on Net poets are like that though, we all have that unders standing .
L.of.L. Tom .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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