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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-02-16 11:57 PM

To simply say I love you
In no way can it describe.
The passion and desire
How much you make me thrive.

You bring a certain fire
A gentle burning glow
A fire like no other
I could ever know.

It’s with me every morning
And with me when I sleep
I need to be inside you
Your warmth that is so deep.

To hold your naked body
Your breast pressed close to mine.
The softness of your skin
Our bodies intertwined.

I wake up in the morning
And feel that you are there
Wrap my arms around you
You know how much I care.

I’ve written many phrases
And all of which no doubt
Contain the many pleasures
Your all that I’m about.

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

1 posted 2000-02-17 12:03 PM

OH  MY  !!!

You just completely and totally described the exact way I feel about my wife.

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!

Very well done, wery well indeed.

"Your all that I’m about."

That has to be one of the most powerful phrases I've read in poetry in a long, long time.    It completly describes TRUE LOVE.

VERY VERY WELL DONE!!

Chris

p.s.  sorry if I seem over enthusiastic...I just love a great poem.

Chris

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

2 posted 2000-02-17 12:17 PM

spiked... I remember the feeling well, all to well. Very nice poem.

B Gravitt

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

3 posted 2000-02-17 12:17 PM

GREAT POEM *WISHES FOR THAT*

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-02-17 12:22 PM

The passion in this piece is grand, to be sure, but what touches me is the degree of accompanying devotion that you express so well...this is beautiful, in word and sentiment, spiked.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-02-17 12:23 PM

Thanks Chris, betty and just another. was afraid to post it thought it might cross the line for open poetry but this is where i like to post so I took a chance. hopefully my judgement was right.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-02-17 12:25 PM

Mmmmm...what else could I say? You just keep
getting better, and better, and better...

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-02-17 12:26 PM

Thank you meadowmuse. Was one written from the heart to the one I love.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

8 posted 2000-02-17 01:33 AM

Thanks serenity
Hoped you might like it.

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