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sweetcollege_girl
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0 posted 2000-02-15 12:12 PM


Vases of roses
Arranged with care
Lovely bouquets
Everywhere
Name tags on all of them
There's one for sis
Is there one for me?
No? You must be wrong
Everyone else got roses
So why didn't I?

Didn't he remember?
Aren't there some coming?
Yes..please say yes

But the roses never came
Love has come and went
Unless he calls later tonight?
Even if he does, he didn't
Send me a single rose


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


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Wizzard
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1 posted 2000-02-15 12:51 PM


IM sorry you were forgoten on Valentine`s day but I hope this will help?

Happy Valentine`s Day       College_Girl

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 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.





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sweetcollege_girl
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2 posted 2000-02-15 12:59 PM


Thanks wizzard..I needed that!    

stay cool  

~~Lavada~~< !signature-->

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-15-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-02-15 01:50 PM


SweetC-Girl~ maybe he was broke? Roses are not the only way a man shows his love for you. Don't be sad. Your poem was heartfelt, but remember, try not to put a price tag on love. -SEA
PREACH
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4 posted 2000-02-15 02:31 PM


Even though I am a guy I know how much it hurts to get nothing when it seems everyone else does.  Remember, if you wear your heart on your sleave it may get washed off, but if you keep it tucked away it will always remain soft. So expect the most from the one your with and if comes from the heart it will be just that, for any and everything that is bought can be taken right back.

"LEARNING TO LOVE LOVE"
       PREACH
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        EVER

sweetcollege_girl
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5 posted 2000-02-15 03:20 PM


What I am saying in the poem is: he didn't get me anything because our relationshp is over..he didn't call and tell me, or send me someting telling me...I had to hear it from a friend..that is the wrong way to hear about your b/f breaking up with you... don't ya'll think? Check out my poem "Lost Valentine" in Teen Poetry #2

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


RainbowGirl
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6 posted 2000-02-15 03:22 PM


Sweetheart:  I hope not but I'm sending lots of hugs, it won't help I know but I'll send them anyway..

HUGS

 Ouvrir mon coeur et âme

Martie
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7 posted 2000-02-15 05:25 PM


Love is such a journey--some times the steps are rocky and slippery, but they all lead towards better understanding inside.
sweetcollege_girl
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8 posted 2000-02-16 11:45 AM


RG: Thanks for the hugs..I needed them

Martie: I know how that goes!  

But don't worry ya'll..it isan't as bad as I thought it would be

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



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