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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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A gentle rain begins to fall he stirs to its music, and calls her image to mind. Far away, she is sleeping, stars shine above her roof, she rises to rhythm of rain. © ‘00 Corinne Bailey |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Beheld from afar.. That one self-same star.... Neato!!..  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
   Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-13-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corrine- Perfection in imagery. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Two people apart, what a connection you have created with this excellent poem Corinne Well done and saying so much. Awe The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery! I like this.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Marge, Nan, Parker and Helmut! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Corinne! So much is said in so few words!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, The economy of words was the key And opened what there was to see. Well done. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Not sure that my first post was clear.  Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...you spoke volumes in few words with this one |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, Seymour, and Hoot! Was trying to see if I could do "less is more," well, more or less! Parker, I'm still not clear on your post, you would please just say it??? LOL Corinne |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Corinne- Such talent you have, to be able to put into so few words such sense-tingling thoughts. This is truly lovely. Peaceful. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sorry I was being bad, I'd have to post it in adult I'll just leave it to your imagination .... But, really. I love this little poem, it does conjour up an image of this mystery girl. I sometimes wonder who she is, and I wish I knew where she looks at her stars from. Parker Parker |
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