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Valentine's Poem (Yuh...)
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Valentine's Poem (Yuh...) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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It is Valentine's Day my dear Should I write you a ballad here I would reveal my love this way And for once not forget this day It's deserving of chaplain's voice Florists and card shops will rejoice I loved you yesterday darling I do love you as much today But the sweet possibilities Of tomorrow and forever on Are what lovers live for Until life is gone So this day must forever last It delves into the future and the past [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You can hot glue that one down wouldn't change a single word excellent writing  Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I'm with Rex, Walt...this is sweet and sincere...wonderful poem! Claire |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Right On Walt. I`ve been trying to come up with some kinda Valentine poem but my brain wont work. Good Job Today is the first day of the rest of my life. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You should show your romantic side more often...it suits you well!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I strongly agree Walt, I even buy the glue. Such piece perhaps looks good in Stone Ever tried carving Walt. Well done. Like it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Walt - I hope you don't waste this great Valentine poem on poor bedraggled Bob, there....  - Good stuff, my friend |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt- I LOVE IT ! What tender sentiment. 'But the sweet possibilities Of tomorrow and forever on Are what lovers live for' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
VERY GOOD POEM!!!! There is nothing bad that i can say is about this poem. This poem is exactly how i feel about someone in this life time of mine. Well good luck |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
im so sweet yuh |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Walt!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Walt, walt, walt! There ya go writing a tender piece! hehe Good job! Sweet? Ya think? Me too! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Call me crazy, but I thought this was rather humorous as well as touching. Well done Walt. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
A great poem. Well done. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh i just let my wife read it and yuh yuh yuh ka-ching money in the bank it worked well hehehehe o im so sweet yuh... |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
Hey, www... hehe.. that's you, www... I like this - timeless love, indeed.. |
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