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Love's Last Breath
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Love's Last Breath |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Love's Last Breath ~*Marge Tindal*~  Our love so alive breathing anew the freshness of me loving just you Growing and glowing a part of me knowing that your love is where I want to be You seem to be lacking fervor but I pull you back my way you said you'd love me for all time now time is slipping away The shadow of your discontent leaves me wondering where you went obvious to me that I am left alone in my love Trying to climb out of the well of you the bucket falls time and time again call the mortician for I believe rigor mortis has set in ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. No rigor mortis in you, Marge! You've got more spunk and life in you than any three women I know. I envy the man who can share it  The poem is excellent, btw. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ LOL ! I thank you for that! You know me ... this is just one of those 'somebody-out-there-needs-it' poems. Still loving you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so wonderful, Marge! I love it! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I just love it when you are 'everywhere'. Thanks for dropping in on me.  ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Hey is this why I am so stiff lately?? RIGOR MORTIS I am glad I found the answer Doctor Lovely Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Super Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ If it has no pulse - chances are it's a goner. ~*Dr.Lovely*~ Hoot~ Thanks again, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Another gem Marge! Marina |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another well-crafted masterpiece! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ Thank you for liking. Nate~ You please this friend with your comment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well, dear Marge, just make sure it ain't you at the bottom of the well! Let him be the stiff one, so to speak! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ 's and more 's~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge....why is it you amaze me each time I read???....I must be a slow learner...lol Once again a great one!! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Lovely but sad, Marge. I liked the formating...I think it adds to the experience. INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ I hope that what I write always amazes you. Thank you for letting me know. I ALWAYS appreciate your read and your comments, my friend. INclan~ Lonely and sad would be a love where only one was still in it, for sure. Thank you for the comment on the format. I just love to 'play' with the words. Glad to know it's appreciated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Marge...I don't think I have to even tell you...I loved it. (of course!!!) Excellent piece. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChrisG~ I just visited your home page ... of course you don't have to tell me ... but I'm glad you did. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was great Marge...I'm sure many out there will need this one...but then again, spring is in the air!! Lovely m'dear!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ And you, my little one ... are a fresh breath of spring. I'm glad you're here. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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