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Beyond Retrospect |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Upon reflection I lay back, Pausing in my recollections Of distorted memory Taking time, To regain my senses And ease my mind Like some fantasy, I try, and I’ve tried To relive old days To make things right, As they used to be But I learned, That those days, Days for which I yearn; Again, will never be |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's good to learn from the past, not try to relive it or live in it.  |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
nice poem I've often wondered if I could go back and re-live times when memories were so grand but I'm afraid that once their the memories would lose their luster and I'd be terribly dissapointed ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Upon reflection I lay back, Pausing in my recollections Of distorted memory Taking time, To regain my senses And ease my mind Like some fantasy, I try, and I’ve tried ------------- theres that word fantasy again...  I like it when you lay back and ponder those deep thoughts...(smile) stalking you still, jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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