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Walking on the elements
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Walking on the elements |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Walking on the elements You sway and throw the winds away and you cry and put the inferno at bay I see your art that could hide a world and I see your thunder being hurled You're by an unfound nature I sense You're walking on the elements Your eyes sparkle and hide the night and you wink to just make things feel right I see you swimming across the heavens and I feel you breathing about the ocean You're by an unfound nature I sense You're walking on the elements You flip a coin just to decide a path and you gaze beyond all the fuss and math your words do silence all battles and war Your love heals all wounds and sores You're by an unfound nature I sense You're walking on the elements |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poeminister, I really like this poem, but at this moment I am at a loss for words, so I will get back to you latter. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, I especially like the repetition of the last lines in each verse. Well done! Denise |
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