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EnciNo
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0 posted 2000-01-03 09:33 AM




Blue sky, ashen black
Gloom strikes everywhere
Us, two, clinging to ourselves
To our sanity, morality

Gently we go, hand in heart

The night cures
Enraptures


© Copyright 2000 EnciNo - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 2000-01-03 09:41 AM


Way to go EnCino and welcome to the Forum.
      Well done,
             Paul
    I'm sorry E n c i N o

[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-03-2000).]

Nan
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2 posted 2000-01-03 01:08 PM


Ah yes - Gently going hand in hand... overcomes just about anything...

Welcome to the party...

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-03 01:49 PM


Welcome to Passions, EnciNo! Lovely poem!

 Denise


Irie
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4 posted 2000-01-03 01:57 PM


Great work. To the point and creative.
Welcome.  

Bojopy
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5 posted 2000-01-03 03:11 PM


Short in length but long in thought... Im new too here.....Thank you for the chance to read this..........Bojopy

 

Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 2000-01-03 04:48 PM


Intriguing, and also, welcome to passions


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

tulip
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7 posted 2000-01-03 05:20 PM


Welcome,
I enjoyed your poem!

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2000-01-03 07:38 PM


Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more of your work!  

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-01-03 09:41 PM


Much said in so few words....welcome to passions  
whiskey
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10 posted 2000-01-03 10:15 PM


Wonderful poem , Welcome  
Seaangel
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11 posted 2000-01-04 01:01 AM


beautiful, although please explain about the title?
welcome to Passions!

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