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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
Fruit less A seed is a façade for love concealed In a fake plastic fruit to hoodwink the hunger. It grows in life, yet death lies in its milieu. Grasp, enjoy its interim fragrance and Feel the warmth embodied with it, for now You are in cloud nine and hungry. Bite, and slake your thirst, Swallow, and purge your hunger As this fruit fills you with empty promises. Jump around amid ecstasy and Wear your love like heaven. Are you waiting for an Angel? Take another bite and wait… Wait till the seed slowly jams your gullet. What! You are suffocating? Sorry, it’s too late, My efforts would seem fruitless… Sean |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
I like your twisted humour...nice! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Just one edit: If it is "plastic" it is fake. So "fake" is redundant. |
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