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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
Where pain dissaperas and stress goes away, and nothing matters anymore- Haven for those who lose their way, Loliipop Heaven is more than lore! When the whole world's laughing at ya and there's nothing else to do, come on down to Lollipop Heaven, we've got a place for you! we've got every style of disillusion, but the difference you'll never know- we've got every manner of deceit and confusion, but, we swear, you'll never wanna go! If ya wanna get rid of pain and heartache, and are willing to pay with your self then today is your big break, 'cause Lollipop Heaven is the best! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Whoa !! What's on those Lollipops man? OK I'll have Two. One for me and one for .......me again. Jon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Interesting.. It'd be nice to know the lollipops secret ingredient... MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lollipops, huh? Well how come they never worked on me? Hehe, what is the secret? Well I'll place an order for a dozen, no telling when they might come in handy! Great poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Count me in! Can you get them by the case?! LOL Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sounds delicious .... order me mine too, please ..... Very interesting and clever piece, rich- pa |
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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Gotta love lollipops! Really nice work ~Jenn~ "Nature's first green is gold, her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaves a flower, but only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf, and Eden sank to grief. So dawn goes down today, nothing gold can stay." Robert Frost |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Hey, I happen to be addicted to lollipops. In fact, this is pretty much what my eyes look like when I'm on lollipops! LOL! Alicia |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Don't let the Government know you have a way to make people happy they'll come and get you. In the meantime I'll take a case also while I can afford it. Excellent poem, i loved it |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
thanks for the responses and if i can get addresses i got 200 cases of lollipops to get rid of...no but in all seriousness this was an actually an extended metaphor for drugs, it was an idea i stumbled upon long ago and just recently finished rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Drat!!....just my luck getting here in time to find that this is about drugs not lollipops. Makes the poem even better tho' rich-pa Jack |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
umm.. unusual poem.. yeah.. I thought it it sounded as though the 'lollypops' were like that.. tempting.. but not what they seemed.. well, I can't explain, but hey, you wrote the poem, so I don't really need to ^_^ interesting ^_^ Lynne |
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