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twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

0 posted 2000-04-03 06:49 PM


The trolls are digging,
The trolls are digging.
The're putting up scaffolds,
and setting up rigging.

The bodies will be heavy,
and there will be a lot.
Trolls have to be ready,
each one shall have a plot.

No need for any headstones.
For no one really cares;
or knew them from each other.
They look alike viewed from the rear.

So when the faeries finish,
MacNastie scores will lie around.
The trolls will do the cleanup,
and throw them in the ground.
The trolls are digging.
The trolls are digging.

Jack


© Copyright 2000 Jack - All Rights Reserved
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-04-03 07:00 PM


I believe we have a story battle going on here!  I look forward to the response Dennis will write to this.< !signature-->

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
          Black Eagle
    Oglala Sioux holy man



[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 04-03-2000).]

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
2 posted 2000-04-03 07:11 PM


This is getting really good fun...Great stuff Jack.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-03 08:14 PM


Sounds like the battle is about to commence! Great poem, Twinsgd!

Denise

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
4 posted 2000-04-04 02:06 PM


I see we faeryie's have some allies!! Power to the (little) people!!!!!!!!!!!!!

swampie the great


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-04-04 02:46 PM


Twinsgd, Nice poem, those McNasties better take notice, this aint no Sunday picnic! Keep up the good work! Dennis :^)
freckles
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
6 posted 2000-04-04 10:43 PM


Jack--Do I sense a Balladeer/Toerag battle beginning between our very own Jack and Dennis?  Great job here, Jack!  

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

twinsgd
Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
7 posted 2000-04-04 11:40 PM


Thank you all....McNastie's seem to be gone so the fun is over for now.
BEAT IT YOU GUYS {kicking trolls back under the bridge}  fun's over.
They hated digging anyway.
Hmmmmm"Trolls in Training"....anyone want to rent some tro.........nah never work.

Jack

KimW
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
8 posted 2000-04-05 12:08 PM


This gave me a giggle and I enjoyed it tremendously!

Great little read

Kim

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