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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Snow, gently falling. Sudden spring storm, snowflakes melt on fingertips. jk |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
mmmmmmmmmm  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great I love the snow and the change over. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This leaves me with a wonderfully warm feeling. I like this a lot. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"melt on fingertips" I like! Joy Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Joannak! I especially love the kind of snow that doesn't hang around too long! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joannak, so soft yet so powerful an image. Oh, the serene calm of spirit, to sit and melt snowflakes on your finger tip. I so enjoy reading your work. Resident "Short" Poet |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
jk, Wonderful haiku. Right now, if I look out the window, I can definitely identify with this.~Gene |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thank you all for your replies. John, dh, child, Joy, Denise, INclan, and Gene, you all are too kind. I myself am inspired by haiku, and I very much enjoy reading others (including you both, Gene and INclan). Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
No more snowball fights But heart-warming nature sounds Heart breaks,yet i smile okay,so this is not very well done but i guess i want to show that i enjoyed ur piece with my attempt at haiku i look 4ward to reading more of ur haikus ") |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Joannak, Great job! You've captured a moment for all to see, such complexity in simplicity! Dennis :^) |
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