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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Fusion see two souls melding into one hot energy released in soundless explosion as an invisible shockwave races outward from the center swallowing everything in it’s path and obliterating life of mere existence © 1/21/00 Gary Pence |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I really like the way you wrote this. I find it to be an exciting piece of work! |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you childomine...this was one of my experiments. I like to do that from time to time to keep things from getting to boring. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Gary, Well done--very creative--much harder than writing haiku, I think. ~Gene |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, it all depends on who's doing the writing... This is a great piece, Jonas! Very creative and good imagery...I think there's some deeper meaning to this, and that just adds more to the already good poem!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Gary! Well done! Beautiful presentation! Denise |
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