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WhisperingWind
Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-03-03 12:09 PM



-This is just a short poem I wrote sometime last summer.  I was feeling alittle down with myself.  I was trying to find away to cheer myself up.  This is actully the first non depressing poem I have written.  I hope you all like it.     -


    Sacred Star

In the moons light
I see a Star
She shines brighter
Then all the rest
Her colour is different
A pretty blue
With a hint of silver
This one Star
Is called the Sacred Star
She only shines
For those who can see her beauty
Who can see her love
You will see her shine'n in the dark
You will see her shine'n in the cold
If you look deep inside her soul
You will find...
She is the Sacred Star
Who will shine down on earth with all her love.

                                               ~Alana Rain Turcotte~

© Copyright 2000 Alana Rain Turcotte - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-03 12:16 PM


This is beautiful, Alana! Welcome to the Pub!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-03-03 12:25 PM


Denise has said what I would.  It is beautiful and I look forward to reading more.  Also - welcome.
Mystykyl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32

3 posted 2000-03-03 01:20 PM


this a really great poem. i hope to see more of your writing. thanks for sharing. good luck in the future.
Misty

Mystykyl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32

4 posted 2000-03-03 01:20 PM


this a really great poem. i hope to see more of your writing. thanks for sharing. good luck in the future.
Misty

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