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Denise
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0 posted 2000-02-29 10:15 PM


I dreamed a dream of me and you
Of kids who laughed the whole day through
So long ago when all was new;
I dreamed a dream that you've dreamt too.

I dreamed of days that long are past
Of special times that went too fast;
The best of times - since unsurpassed;
I dreamed of days not meant to last.

I dreamed a dream not long ago
Of kinder times - that children know;
I'm still warmed by its after-glow;
I dreamed a dream of long ago.

I dreamed a dream of you and me;
Of innocence and revelry;
Of tranquil times quite trouble-free;
I dreamed a dream of 'used to be'.

Denise





 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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1 posted 2000-02-29 10:18 PM


Aww, Denise! It's beautiful, like all your poems!   What more can I say? I'm speechless! (Well, almost...)
Thanks so much!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-29 10:40 PM


Thanks, Sam! I'm glad you liked it!

Denise

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-03-01 12:09 PM


I dreamed a dream not long ago
Of kinder times - that children know;
I'm still warmed by its after-glow;
I dreamed a dream of long ago.

I dreamed a dream of you and me;
Of innocence and revelry;
Of tranquil times quite trouble-free;
I dreamed a dream of 'used to be'.

denise this is SO perfect...simply beautiful.
and perfect for our sweet sammy!!
JM



 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*



Aimster
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4 posted 2000-03-01 11:07 AM


~denise

as i am with all your poems, here i sit in awe...you have quite the talent woman! this was a wonderful poem about sam...such a sweet poem. thanks for sharing it with all of us. take care!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

childomine
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5 posted 2000-03-01 02:21 PM


Such a sweet expression of love!!  Beautiful!
just_another_fe
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6 posted 2000-03-01 04:42 PM


i dunno what to say except its beautiful and i love it   good job
Denise
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7 posted 2000-03-02 09:53 AM


Thank you everybody for reading and for your kind replies! I am glad that you liked it!

Denise

Cerenity
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8 posted 2000-03-03 03:49 PM


Hi Denise,

I found this dreamy poem and of course you are the one to be the dream maker, beautiful poem.

Cerenity

Mystykyl
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9 posted 2000-03-03 04:17 PM


THIS WAS A GREAT POEM...WHAT MORE CAN I SAY? I'M IN AWE. THANKS...IT INSPIRED A NEW POEM.
=O)~

twinsgd
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10 posted 2000-03-03 07:12 PM


Poignant and wistful...very nice Denise...Oh to be dreamt of.
Angel
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11 posted 2000-03-03 11:53 PM


I loved this. It was so beatufil...

 ~Susie~


Denise
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12 posted 2000-03-04 12:46 PM


Thank you Cerenity, Misty, Twinsgd and Angel for your lovely comments! They are always appreciated!  

Denise

Pepper
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13 posted 2000-03-04 02:47 PM


Denise .... wonderful, wonderful poem !!!!
Thank you for taking me back in time for a warm rememberence ..
I love this piece .....    

Denise
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14 posted 2000-03-05 11:04 AM


Thank you, Pepper, I'm glad it took you back to those wonderful times! Glad to see you back too!!  

Denise

Sasikat
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15 posted 2000-03-05 11:38 AM


Denise,

This is absolutely beautiful, and with such love behind it.  It certainly put a warmth in my heart while reading it.

Sheila

Denise
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16 posted 2000-03-05 12:08 PM


Thank you Sheila! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Denise

wonderous
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17 posted 2000-03-05 01:50 PM


its such a beautiful sentiment
captures the essense of so many relationships which once were but now exist only in memories

Gene
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18 posted 2000-03-05 05:15 PM


Denise,

Lovely poem. I like poems about dreams.  

~Gene

Denise
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19 posted 2000-03-05 11:03 PM


Thank you Wonderous and Gene! I'm glad you both liked this!  

Denise

danni
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20 posted 2000-03-06 03:45 AM


sweet reminiscence with a bit of sadness for days left behind. seems the story of life. wonderful poem!
Denise
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21 posted 2000-03-06 07:09 PM


Thank you, Danni for reading and for your kind words!
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