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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-08-18 12:30 PM


I know it's real
When I look into your eyes
I know it's real
When you put your hand in mine
I know it's real
When you promise me
I know it's real
When you say we'll forever be
I know it's real
When I'm in your arms
I know it's real
When you keep me from harm
I know it's real
When I see your smile
I know it's real
When you talk about Kyle
I know it's real
When it's you I see
I know it's real
When you say you love me


July 30, 2000

For someone I will always love.  You mean the world to me.  I won't let you down if you don't.  I love you.


To everyone in the pub: this summer, I hardly had time to sit down, much less at the computer for hours and hours every week.  I'm so glad that I finally have time for y'all!  I'm baaack!!!!!

Alicia A. Renzelman

© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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1 posted 2000-08-18 12:37 PM


Hey!  I really like the repition on this one, it works great.  Can't wait to read more of your poems
Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

2 posted 2000-08-18 01:08 PM


This is wonderful..I'm glad you know it's real..I still have a long way to go
   ...this was written so beautifully.....beth< !signature-->

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

[This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-18-2000).]

Denise
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3 posted 2000-08-18 07:34 PM


Welcome back, Alicia! Lovely poem!

Denise

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