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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-08-17 09:28 AM



The Little Angel

A little angel floated down
With creamy wings and halo crown
Descending through the morning dew
And settled there within my view

She looked at me with cherub face
And hovering steady in one place
She played upon a tiny harp
Such wondrous music in the dark

The glow of halo lit her face
A smile so sweet and full of grace
As I upon my pillow lay
Let little angel fingers play

She plucked a song that ever rings
So tenderly upon the strings
This magic music raptured me
Into a sense of ecstacy

These tunes so dear filled with delight
Like crystal prisms in the night
Filled the room with rainbow hymns
Of music chords I felt within

Never had one played like this
With resonating chords of bliss
What caused an angel to appear
To play sweet music in my ear

Then in a wink she sped away
Just upon the break of day
I knew that this was not a dream
This angel sweet with wings of cream

Perhaps the angel came to me
And played a hymn exquisitely
So that my heart would be thereof
Prepared to follow her above

But ‘twas not so, for on that day
‘Twas hymns of joy the cherub played
For very early on that morn
My baby grandson had been born

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Alle'cram
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1 posted 2000-08-17 09:38 AM


Breathtakingly Beautiful and I believe! Make that, I know!    Marcy
Lady Lost
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2 posted 2000-08-17 09:40 AM


Elizabeth this is amazing!  This really took my breath away...What a glorious day it is when a baby is born!.....beth

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pegasus111
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3 posted 2000-08-17 11:02 AM


a wonderful, warm poem..outstanding piece. bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-08-17 12:50 PM


Another masterpiece here, it's breath taking
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-08-17 12:50 PM


Elizabeth,
Your baby grandson had been born
Anounced by a cherubs flugelhorn?
Your poem is just beautiful forgive the pun.
Love ya Sy

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-08-17 08:25 PM


What a marvelous flow and melodic feel you've woven here Liz! Simply beautiful ... wisked me away for a little while with this darling angel. Lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Little_Spyro
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7 posted 2000-08-17 10:13 PM


hehe....this reminds me a lot of my angel, a_little_girl...she's just as beautiful as this poem, as well as the music. You did an excellent job on this, Elizabeth!  
Thanks for the incredible read.

Little Spyro T. Dragon

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8 posted 2000-08-17 10:29 PM


Oh, Lizzie~
You always do it .. just right !
~*Marge*~


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ellie LeJeune
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9 posted 2000-08-17 11:16 PM


Liz; nothing so wonderful as becoming a grandmother, and your poem heralds that so perfectly! love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2000-08-18 03:17 AM


I appreciate each one of your responses. Thank you so much, everyone
Liz

Lost Dreamer
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11 posted 2000-08-18 05:11 AM


Elizabeth, This poem is absolutely beautiful, the blessing of children alone is amazing, yet your poem brings the event to life with such a wonderful grace. : )
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-08-18 06:48 AM


Lost Dreamer, Thank you for your beautiful comment. The birth of a child is so beautiful and when my first grandson was born I thought I heard angels singing
LOve
Liz

Jon Mewett
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13 posted 2000-08-18 09:28 AM


A Wonderful piece Elizabeth.

Jon

Denise
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14 posted 2000-08-18 07:19 PM


Elizabeth, this is charming and angelic! I love it! Just precious!

Denise

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